Post by sigmund on May 17, 2008 17:13:28 GMT -5
Here, this needs some serious work. I'll help from here, it's alot easier.
Name: Sigmund = SiggyIf he is an apprentice, you must put paw at the ends of his name. And Sigmund is not nature related. Don't tell me he is a kittypet so he doesn't need it, because Rusty became Firepaw, and so would Sigmund.
Gender: Male
Age: 8 moons
Clan: Kitty to WindclanErm...So, Windclan, then?
Rank: Apprentice
Personality: He’s a laid back kinda boy, Is this not finished? You put a coma there, and it's hardly a sentence long, so that is what i'm assuming. Either way, it must be MUCH longer.
Appearance: (You can include a picture.)Okay, now i'm convinced this wasn't a finished bio. If it's not finished, please put (unfinished) in the title.
History: Lavender, Siggy’s mother, was a breeding cat for hisOnce again, not finished.
RP Sample: Sigmund scratched at the door to his nest. He found that the cat door had been locked. He was so confused, His two-legs weren’t answering his cries. Sigmund looked around and saw the window sill. Still clumsy, he made his way up onto the railing of the back steps and wobbled his way upon the sill. He scratched and cried out to his two-legs, which he could see through the window. Five minutes into his crying, he saw his mother rush to him. He bunted his head against the glass, she mimicked him. They pawed at the glass separating them, but it wasn’t working. Suddenly his mother became panicked. She flared and screeched but Siggy didn’t understand. A flash of lightning lit the sky and Siggy had little warning before he saw the reflection, and the rubbery glove grabbed him. Rain dretched his fur as thunder drowned out his cries for his mother.
Codeword: (Look in the rules!)Unfinished.
I will put this in the right sub-board this time and change the title, but you need to start thinking before you make a bio.
Name: Sigmund = SiggyIf he is an apprentice, you must put paw at the ends of his name. And Sigmund is not nature related. Don't tell me he is a kittypet so he doesn't need it, because Rusty became Firepaw, and so would Sigmund.
Gender: Male
Age: 8 moons
Clan: Kitty to WindclanErm...So, Windclan, then?
Rank: Apprentice
Personality: He’s a laid back kinda boy, Is this not finished? You put a coma there, and it's hardly a sentence long, so that is what i'm assuming. Either way, it must be MUCH longer.
Appearance: (You can include a picture.)Okay, now i'm convinced this wasn't a finished bio. If it's not finished, please put (unfinished) in the title.
History: Lavender, Siggy’s mother, was a breeding cat for hisOnce again, not finished.
RP Sample: Sigmund scratched at the door to his nest. He found that the cat door had been locked. He was so confused, His two-legs weren’t answering his cries. Sigmund looked around and saw the window sill. Still clumsy, he made his way up onto the railing of the back steps and wobbled his way upon the sill. He scratched and cried out to his two-legs, which he could see through the window. Five minutes into his crying, he saw his mother rush to him. He bunted his head against the glass, she mimicked him. They pawed at the glass separating them, but it wasn’t working. Suddenly his mother became panicked. She flared and screeched but Siggy didn’t understand. A flash of lightning lit the sky and Siggy had little warning before he saw the reflection, and the rubbery glove grabbed him. Rain dretched his fur as thunder drowned out his cries for his mother.
Codeword: (Look in the rules!)Unfinished.
I will put this in the right sub-board this time and change the title, but you need to start thinking before you make a bio.
